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Post  Guest Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:11 pm

bitches actually.

lose fitting fleece trousers,
with elasticated waistband,
for easy access.
tired-looking,greasy,shabby,
and that was just their hair.

"spare cigarette mister?"
i should've said "yes please".
after-thought.
a request for payment in kind maybe?
i don't think so No

to think,that they have parents.
how sad,how awful,
i wonder if they'll look back one day,
and remember,
their cringe-worthy actions.

but for now,they beg,
do tricks for fags,
spare change,and,
if their lucky,
a swig of cheap cider

i keep my head down,
and go about my business,
hoping that i'll go unnoticed,
but they don't miss much.
those stray dogs.

my life,my world.

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Post  bitofatwat Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:00 am

This Is England 2010

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:02 am

giving the dog a bone eh? Rolling Eyes

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:35 pm

Been a while, but...

Spoiler:

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:38 pm

how's it goin bert?

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:50 pm

Not too bad, Eric. Had a few days away at half term, been more tired this week as a result Laughing but worth it. Just getting back to normal now.

Saw your work on here over the last week. Distinctive style, always worth a read, nice to see something is consistent

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:51 pm

WORK confused

just the ramblings of an old fool.

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:52 pm

but yes,
you might say that i'm consistent.
nothing changes there mate. Embarassed

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:54 pm

erixter wrote:WORK confused

just the ramblings of an old fool.

All literature is the ramblings of an old fool in someone's eyes, Eric. Doesn't make it any less valid.

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:54 pm

thankyou.

i think Smile .

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Post  Guest Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:08 pm

Readable social commentary of our time, Eric. Can't ask for more than that.

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