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Post  Guest Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:08 pm

no,
i didn't have a shave,
and must look awful.
went for my bus out of town.
god i hate bus queues.

so many people,coming and going make me feel so exposed,i look for a quite corner to stand in but there isn't one.

saw an orange mini-cooper with soft-top folded back.
nice.

KUEHNE+NAGEL!
trailer 401204,
sort that curtain out eh?
not nice.
in fact it's downright shabby. Mad

that sun's getting hot.
the rooks are nesting.
it's that time o f year.

girl in black keeps looking at me.
goth with studs and sleepers in her lips.
don't worry love you're quite safe.
excuse me while i throw up.
why are young attracxtive girls doing that to themselves?
if they're trying to put potential suiters off,it works.

my bus rolled up 10 minutes late,
single-deck coach type and heaving with passengers.
O...M...G.
people.
ugh!

bus-stops whizz by,
and in no time at all i'm getting off.

now i have a long walk to the outskirts for coat-shop.

walking down a grubby street,seeing boarded up shop windows and doorways,
interspersed by;
ladbrokes,
something called chinatown,a takeaway i think.
video-knights,
one-stop.

and wouldn't you know it?
WESTERN UNION;
need cash?
got gold?
"we buy gold for cash".
yes i bet they do.

aint that just a sign of our time.

anyway,
onwards and outwards,
and i could smell that i was leaving one world,
and entering another.

suddenly there are high hedges,fences,and electronically controlled gates.
with trimmed lawns and cherry blossom.
freshly cut grass,i love that smell.
primroses and honesuckle.
mmmmmmmmmmmm,
deep breathes,
life looks pretty sweet in this outskirt.

and then,
quite abruptly,
there are industrial units,
and there it is.

STERLING SAFETYWEAR,
it looked big,
and intimidating,
and i couldn't do it,
i just couldn't find the courage to go in.
so,
after all that,
i turned and walked away,
back into town.
Crying or Very sad

i had 10 minutes to get supplies from asda,
then catch the next bus.
yeah right.
so it was do the shopping,
chips from the greasy greek,
then long wait.

watching the sights go by,
oh boy.
tits,bums,and tatoos.

people,
they really are something else.

why is it that when i travel i think seriously deep thoughts about my life?
and i always end up with guilt.
and i hate that.
i don't think that it's fair.
they think that i don't care,
i'm just old,
and tired,
so tired.

and so now i'm home.
spewing out all this shit.
and now i'm sorry,
and ever so slightly embarrassed by it all.

why?
i don't know why.


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Post  bitofatwat Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:15 pm

erixter wrote:no,
i didn't have a shave,
and must look awful.
went for my bus out of town.
god i hate bus queues.

so many people,coming and going make me feel so exposed,i look for a quite corner to stand in but there isn't one.

saw an orange mini-cooper with soft-top folded back.
nice.

KUEHNE+NAGEL!
trailer 401204,
sort that curtain out eh?
not nice.
in fact it's downright shabby. Mad

that sun's getting hot.
the rooks are nesting.
it's that time o f year.

girl in black keeps looking at me.
goth with studs and sleepers in her lips.
don't worry love you're quite safe.
excuse me while i throw up.
why are young attracxtive girls doing that to themselves?
if they're trying to put potential suiters off,it works.

my bus rolled up 10 minutes late,
single-deck coach type and heaving with passengers.
O...M...G.
people.
ugh!


Do you drive eric? if not get a cycle solves all that hassle and its often quicker about town
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Post  Guest Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:41 pm

i don't drive,
and bugger bikes,
i'd rather walk.
feeling knackered now though.

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Post  bitofatwat Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:48 pm

erixter wrote:i don't drive,
and bugger bikes,
i'd rather walk.
feeling knackered now though.
#

If its mostly flat where you are then biking would be easier than walking, pick o cheap one up and give it a try
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Post  Guest Wed Mar 23, 2011 5:07 pm

Your opening post is very poetic and was a pleasure to read Eric.


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Post  Guest Wed Mar 23, 2011 5:32 pm

hello nobster. Smile

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Post  Guest Wed Mar 23, 2011 11:54 pm

Nobby Cheese wrote:Your opening post is very poetic and was a pleasure to read Eric.

Bunyan would write Pilgrim's Progress like that if he were still about today

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Post  Guest Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:53 am

Bert wrote:
Nobby Cheese wrote:Your opening post is very poetic and was a pleasure to read Eric.

Bunyan would write Pilgrim's Progress like that if he were still about today

bunyan a tad more interesting though.

wish i could write,
not so much to entertain,
but just to engage people,
give pleasure,
and occassionally be a little provative maybe,
provocative in so far as giving people cause to think, ponder, make judgements,form opinions,y'know? Smile

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Post  Guest Thu Mar 24, 2011 11:54 am

You mad cunt

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Post  bitofatwat Thu Mar 24, 2011 12:51 pm

erixter wrote:
Bert wrote:
Nobby Cheese wrote:Your opening post is very poetic and was a pleasure to read Eric.

Bunyan would write Pilgrim's Progress like that if he were still about today

bunyan a tad more interesting though.

wish i could write,
not so much to entertain,
but just to engage people,
give pleasure,
and occassionally be a little provative maybe,
provocative in so far as giving people cause to think, ponder, make judgements,form opinions,y'know? Smile

If it gives you something back such as pleasure do it eric Wink
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Post  Guest Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:35 pm

boat,
it gives me nothing back because it mirrors my sexual prowess,
PANTS. Crying or Very sad

it's like;
i have so much going on in my head sometimes,
i wish that i could paint,
would probably have my sanity brought into question if i could, Very Happy
but there you go.

so,
bring on the written word,
but i'm pants at that as well.

so,
i spew it all out on here,
and well,
i'm not hurting anybody,
the inmates can take it or leave it.

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Post  Guest Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:37 pm

Nobby Cheese wrote:You mad cunt

and nobby,
seriously,
i do wonder about that.
you may be closer to the truth than you know.

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